Valene Lechman
Tuesday, July 19, 2011
What do you think of the start of my story?
I thought you did a good job with this other than some mixed up tenses. I was a little confused at the opening of this excerpt because I couldn't tell if the narrator was speaking or the writer was speaking, but good job so far.
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